Darius was a young boy who had no respect for authorities, at all. Everyone around the neighborhood only saw him as a person who had no feelings, except for hatred. He was the type of person who didn't care what other people thought of him. He was just a bad influence on people.
In the story "Darius and the Clouds," Darius acts differently from what he is used to. While doing his usual annoying habits; chasing girls with firecrackers, and running around with a stick that touched a rat, Darius noticed something that he never experienced before. While looking up at the sky, he said that he saw God. "You all see that cloud, that fat one there?" "That's God." Darius wasn't acting the same because it looked like he had a heart and everyone around him has never seen him this way before. They only see him as the "bad boy" who gets away with anything. But, Darius has sweet moments in his life that some people can't understand.
*Chelsea Merine*
Chelsea,
ReplyDelete"God" is a proper noun. It has to be capitalized.
Your verb tenses are inconsistent in this post. Please make them consistent--keep it in the present tense.
Finally, your last sentence makes no sense at all. It's not a sentence, really. Please re-read and edit so that it's clear.