Why me? I asked myself. Why did I have to do it. I had second thoughts weather or not I should back down. Weather or not I should be the wimp my cousins say I am. My heart was racing so fast you couldn't even imagine. I was incredibly petrified in the sight of what I call "the monster." Hearing the other kids scream and close their eyes as tight as possible made me explode my emotions! But, I couldn't let myself down. I had to do it. I promised myself that one day I would have the courage to conquer my crazy fear and just go with it.
"Come on, it's not that bad," yelled my cousin Jellenah. I hate to be yelled at, especially when I'm so nervous. My eyes were glued above as I'm almost in the front of the line. "Ok, stop yelling at me!" I screamed. It was supposed to be a fun day, I thought. As I walked towards the front of the line, all I can do is think. What can happen if I get on? Will I get hurt?" My legs were trembling as I got strapped in. My cousin was super excited while I was about to pass out! "How do you have a smile on your face right now?" I asked her with a grin on my face. "Because I'm not a punk like you!" Honestly, I just wanted to punch her, but it would get me in a lot of family drama. I was so high I could have touched the blazing sun. With my head pressed against the dirty handle bar, I yelled "Ahhhhhhhh!" I didn't care at the moment. With my eyes closed and my head clear of thoughts, the ride was finally over.
-*Sidney Merine*
Did you hear me say "No amusement park vignettes"? They are all the same and so they are dull. Please rewrite this so that it is more personal and interesting.
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